Sample discussion page
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This is a sample of what part of a discussion page might look like.
For exciting real examples of discussion pages from last year, when everything was done in writing, see:
- Compass_&_Straightedge_Construction_and_the_Impossible_Constructions
- Prime_spiral_(Ulam_spiral)
- Buffon's_Needle
- or follow any of the links at S10
Contents |
Basic description
Bob, 6/9:
The opening paragraph should make it clearer what the page will be about. The first paragraph seems to talk about X, while the second seems to talk about Y.
- Sue, 6/10:
- I added a transition sentence to clarify that X gives rise to Y, which is what the page really focuses on.
- Bob, 6/10:
- Looks good
More mathematical explanation
Throughout
Allison, 6/15:
You've used some variables that you haven't explicitly defined. We can talk about them one by one, or you can just find them.
- Sue, 6/15:
- I think I've defined them all now.
- Allison, 6/16:
- Looks good, except your definition of R_n is hard to understand. How about wording it as...
- Sue, 6/17:
- Done
Dave and Sue, 6/4:
We discussed in person how parts of the page seem extremely rigorous, while other parts seem much less so.
- Dave and Sue, 6/7:
- We discussed how the proof of Eq. 1 still has a lot of assumptions, and agreed on which assumptions should be better justified.
- Dave, 6/8:
- This all looks good now.
Subsection 2
Mary and Sue, 6/13:
Mary pointed out typos in Eqns 3 - 5, and Sue fixed them. We also discussed some small wording issues. One example was changing "xxx" to "yyy"
